Ok, so I made a few minor changes on the original and then I thought I could rewrite it. Thoughts anybody? Embedded in my mind lays a piece of forever. A bird eyes memory of you laying down, listening to the rain. Dew drops hit the sweet spot of the ever-clear glass; gasping in awe with each thundering sound. The lightning strikes, yet you pose so beautifully. Holding your breath with each noise,more

I love the rain

I painted a picture in my mind of you laying down with a clear view to a window, eyes wide opened, listening to the rain drops and watching them whenever the lightning strikes for that beautiful split second. One hand over your tummy while another poses above your pillow. Your breathing becoming more and more heavy and with each exhale your worries becoming less and less obsolete until your mind hmore

A dirty thought speakeasy

Hush girl, your making too much noise There something about you, tonight its in the lips, in the hips, something sexy in your poise Forget me not, you won't, forget me, not without a fight Hush girl, you're making me obsolete Killing me softly, making life so insignificant Upstairs, downstairs, on and off your feet No, I'm not God, but I'm just as omnipotent Talk girl, I know you didn't die A limore

Non-acute Jellification

Non canonical, the heart can churn or burn. It fades into shrouds and pieces of what once was. LIke the pedals of a rose which cannot be repaired, it can only be replaced by another rose. A single rose cannot be blissful or elegant unless presented so. Patronize it into a "dozen" or a group and now the bliss is merely piss. Though the heart, once full and complete, now its sporadic and more

Forward, not backward

Jumping in, jumping out, your nowhere, your everywhere I promised you'd be just an afterthought, instead your my everythought My muse is jaded, my past is faded, yet when I look at you, I know I made it Can we cross paths, cross worlds one more time Can we cross our hearts and wish forever one last time Can we, can we ever go back Push me aside, and I'm still stuck on your mind You promismore